The scary stormy night
On a scary night wind blew like a ghost whispering and it looked so spooky the windows were still open and it was freezing cold as a huge big wind was blowing everything down. Then after that I had a cosy comfortable blanket, too keep me warm. Then later that scary night the wind blew even bigger so we shut all the windows. Then for our yummy dinner we had chicken and hot chips with some cold tomato sauce from the freezing cold fridge. We didn’t hear the stomp of thunder because the doors were shut the strong wind blew some of the leaves into the wet slippery grass and dropped it in the front yard where the wet mail fell from the letterbox. We could rip it so easy and it is like ripping a piece of paper. Then after that I took a plastic bottle of good spring water and the outside was so easy to scrunch it like squeezing a big cake. I drank little bit because it was a big bottle. Then when we went to the room we had to sleep straight away. In the morning we looked outside then there was a big humongous mess of leaves. Then we had some yummy crunchy soft food from the night and we saved some of the food because time was running away and we needed to get to school. Daniel

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ReplyDeleteThank you Daniel for your story. I like how you have used all these describing words to tell your story. It made me feel like I was actually at your house during this stormy night. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteSalam Room 13! We are Room 6 from Waikowhai Primary School. That was an amazing story, when Gerhard was reading it felt like the storm was happening in our class! Thank you for sharing your super spooky story! We loved it! From Room 6 @ Waikowhai Primary School.
ReplyDeleteThank you Room 6 for leaving a lovely comment. We would love to see some of your stories too! From Room 13
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